Here I am stuck in my crib with nothing to do. If only my parents could be in my size 2 shoes. My names Clyde, Clyde Autman Tippler the third, but my friends call me Betty. I'm a good lookin' baby with brown hair and green eyes. Let me tell you this, I love the stock market. You may of seen me on a few of those e-trade commercials, yep thats right I'm that guy. Theres nothing I like more then trading some stocks.
My parents are Gary and Mary, their both stay at home parents, so I have no chance of ever escaping this crib. At least tonight we're having pancakes for dinner. Pancakes are absolutley my favorite food in the world. I always stash some in my crib because us babys are always hungry. Well I got to go the parents are coming. Untill next time.
Clyde
"You may of seen"...should be may have
ReplyDelete"thats" Be sure to use your apostrophe you have several mistakes with apostrophes
how should we spell the plural form of "babys"
Be sure to check for spelling and punctuation mistakes, if you double check I am sure you will catch most of them. I do love the bit about the pancakes; that is very creative and funny.